Trees....
A wonderful creation of God.
They give us shelter from the rain.
They give us every breath we take.
They give us beauty to brighten up each day.
They give us this and so much more,
and yet we take them for granted.
We need to open up our eyes,
to see the damage that is done,
from cutting down a single tree.
We need to open up our hearts,
and take care of the trees,
that give us life, shelter, and beauty.
A contest entry
- Less than 50 Trophies? Come On In! by AliceinPoetryLand.
1000 points, ended November 10, 2008, 14 entries
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Wonderful!!! Thanks for entering!!!!
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lovely write, very thoughtful... I care very much about nature too, trees are beautiful, and you really expressed this!!!!! Great job!!!!!!
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What a wonderful poem! The passion you have for the destruction of our trees comes therough ion this very well indeed.
I enjoyed reading this very much.
Thanks so much for your entry
Gaylene
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What wonderful caring thoughts. yes. trees give us alot in life and we really need to take care of them.
I think you have a little typo in this line... "from cutting done a single tree." i think you meant the word 'down'
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yay! this is beautiful. i love trees and i love your poem. i wish u mucho luck in the contest <3
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