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Today

She sees him from affair
Almost love at first sight
She can’t keep him out of her mind
She stands up
She gets courage
She asks him out today.

She likes him
She loves him
She smiles today.

He ignores her
He doesn’t listen
She loves him
She cries today.

She cries
She breaks up with him
She breaks his heart
As well as her own today.

She sees his aim message
She sees how uncaring he sounds
She wants to cry
But people are around.
She cuss’s his name today.

Moments after his message
She goes and sits alone
She wants him back
To hold her
To kiss her face
But how could this be
She had just felt disgust for him
But it doesn’t matter
He can hurt her
She just wants him to love her
Sometimes
She loses her common sense today.

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