from a pillar
of mortar and brick
crystal eyes…
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turbulent seas
to gather lost souls,
of his stranded flock
Author notes
God’s salvation
picture inspired;
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Image/64/649.jpg
A contest entry
- 20/20 by Samplette.
400 points, ended November 2, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I had to revisit this poem. I love lighthouses SO much, and I love your portrayal of it..a beacon of god to lost souls upon the vast sea.
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and i tooo... am a lover of lighthouses, they are a symbol of God's eyes
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Good take on the picture. Best to you.
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A lovely connection to the picture. The true Light calling in the lost. Beautifullly penned. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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follow the light
I love lighthouses, beacons of light
beautifully done
God bless you...
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lighthouses
Mally this is beautiful. I love lighthouses, and I always thought of the light as god's way of watching over the sea and her men.
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this is really well done
was Jesus' father a lighthouse?
and was marry just a ship that sailed too close to shore?
so many questions
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Intersting and unique!
Well done and bessings to you in the contest.
~ James ~
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