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Falling

I’m confused
Lost and alone
I’ve got a man
A somewhat happy home
But I feel so isolated
He loves me & I’m debating
There are rumors
There is drama
Everyone is making me stronger
But soon I know
I might break down
Fall face flat onto the cold ground
I can’t handle everything
I don’t have my friends from elementary school
They ditched me in eighth grade
The year I really needed that support
My boyfriend replaced them
But he’s throwing me into the future when I’m only prepared for the present
I, I know
Soon I’ll break down
But I, I wonder
Who will be there when I fall?
Who will pick me up & mend my wounds?

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