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Falling in Love

Is the softening shell
Unbuckling armour
Soul believing, preparing
For blooming
Bonding, blending
Melting into one

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That is why it hurts so bad when expectations fail...

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  • Nangaleema
    November 10, 2008

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    yes! and the revealing of the soft white under belly, too, don't forget that! lol.

    awwww. this is so sweet. love the "Unbuckling armour". - NANGALEEMA


  • JinSays gold member
    November 5, 2008
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    not gonna touch this one.
    I can take it too many places. Best of luck to you,
    jin


  • sheltered
    November 2, 2008
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    love sucks
    but that's just me
    good luck with that