Love is a magical word..
Its a feeling of two becoming as one
Seeing and feeling words unspoken.
Love I believe is a treasure...
Not of Gold, Jewels rubies or diamonds
but
Caring unconditionally.
Being unselfish in wants and desires.
It is forgiving.
It builds bridges of communication.
and
Brings ecstasy of joy and laughter.
It can't be defined by only one word
but
If I chose one word
It believe it would be...
Love is blind.
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- Your Belief In Love (75 words or less) by oOJohnOo.
400 points, ended November 16, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wonderful poem. be sure to add in your authors notes the reasoning behind this poem.
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Hello my beautiful AP husband.I hope this message finds you with a happy heart my love.
I have just finished reading your poem, and wish to let you know how much I enjoyed the read.
A most beautiful write you have penned here.
Your words grabbed at me and together we journeyed into your story.
Such strong emotion of love you have woven into your write.
The reader can feel such tenderness as they read your words of love.
Your words have come from deep within your heart, and the reader can see this, that is part of what makes this poem so beautiful.
You have provided excellent visuals within your write and the emotions that are woven into your poem can be felt by the reader.
Over all....it's a wonderful, very sensual, and beautiful poem that you have written.
I wish you all the best in the contest my beautiful husband, and know that you are sent many beautiful blessings of love and happiness.
Your AP Angel Wife,
~Angel-Anne~
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