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[ Sitting here, staring at the dull brown wall ]

Sitting here, staring at the dull brown wall
waiting patiently for that one fateful call
the call I have dreaded for a while

I pick up the phone,
listen to the grim dialtone

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  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    March 31

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    YOU NEVER CEASE TO AMAZE ME .
    YOU HAVE SAID SO MUCH IN SO FEW WORDS.
    aNOTHER GREAT WRITE.
    PapPaw.

  • Time focus on Me
    November 2, 2008

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    hey

    sis u did a beautiful job with this poem. ALsome work way to go. Keep da ink flowing your work is alsome. I enjoy reading it. Keep up the marvelous job..