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Silver Clouds





cambric of solace
coax around my feet
to soar carnation skies
where silver clouds meet

A contest entry

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  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    Great write


  • Samplette gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    A lovely write. You look deeper than the lighthouse, very nice. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • Jesann gold member
    November 1, 2008
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    Beautiful!!!
    Great take on pic prompt.
    Well done.


    • afroqban
      November 1, 2008
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      its a pleasure to get online and see a comment from u my friend! how have u been anyway, dont hear from u much. tryin to get the kids to bed so i can have time to read ur good writing. three of the poems i have written were inspired by ur poetry. u are one of my favs! thanks for taking the time to read my work


  • everyone1 gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    Wow!

    This is beautiful, inspiring and deep.

    Well done ...

    Best to you in this contest,

    ~ James ~

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