the sky bent awkwardly into a distant shore
until even the brightest lighthouse
found it hard to shine on reassured
A contest entry
- 20/20 by Samplette.
400 points, ended November 2, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great sky personification...I love using the sky in poems, usually in some god-bashing way, LoL.
Oooh lighthouse; how poignant
Jessica
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I like this, I always like pieces that there are more than one interpretation and there are a few in this piece.
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Great write.
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Good write here. Nicely penned. I like the imagery and flow. Very nice. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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double vision may cause the weary to steer off course...
and they become those lost
mal
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Incredible ...
Best wishes to you in the contest.
This was really good.
~ James ~
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Never trust lighthouses lol there are always rocks!
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