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The Ocean

Waves crash soundly,
With sand all around me.

The sun shines down,
As my body begins to brown.

A contest entry

So what do you think?

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  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    I love the ocean and great write.


  • Samplette gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    I think this is a good take on the picture prompt. Well written, and a pleasure to read. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • everyone1 gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    Great1

    I loved the rhyming of this poem ... I can't write rhyme very well ... Best wished in this contest, and God bless you.

    ~ James ~