Winter’s breath finds
her tears mingling
with deciduous autumn
in spotlight of despair
Author notes
13 words on the contest picture prompt
Picture Credit: http://kaikuskylianfay.deviantart.com/art/Found-102307489
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture XV by Manda Kathryn.
400 points, ended November 17, 2008, 43 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I confess I had to look up the word deciduous ~
What a beautifully sad piece; I felt tears forming within as I read
♥
Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Well done. You've woven a fitting tapestry of imagery here. Thanks for sharing.
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The despair is palpable in only a few words! Captures the pic so well!
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Beautiful
This is excellent. Your choice of words depicts the picture very well, and describe the mood to the T. Beautifully done. My favorite line:
"in spotlight of despair"
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My
The curtain of despair does seem to be falling over her. Perfect fit, your words, for the picture I think.
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A perfect take in this picture. Brilliant as usual
All the best with this.
Gaylene
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Wonderful work with this prompt
my friend! Great imagery here.
All the best to you in this
contest and keep it up!
Jeremy0826
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