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Beacon

Beacon
above shoreline,
tempest subsides as light
signals finale of life’s storm
with peace.

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  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    Very serene, the healing light bringing new comfort and hope, Very soothing imagery my friend. Thanks for sharing.

    Dennis


  • smiley
    November 3, 2008
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    nice

    I like the calming affect this piece has...

    Yvonne


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    Great write and form


  • poetrandy
    November 2, 2008
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    Very nice!

    A super cinquain! I like the flow, rhythm and subject. Great job! Good luck in the contest!


  • Samplette gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    A well crafted cinquain. Very nice. Thank you for entering the contest, I enjoyed the lovely read.
    Sam


  • Malabu
    November 2, 2008

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    lovely inspirational cinqiain

    of light
    through darkest night
    i will lead you to the
    garden of eden


  • everyone1 gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    Brilliant!

    I truly loved this one.

    You have a lot of tallent,

    Best to you in the contest ...

    ~ James ~

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