love. it cuts into my soul
like razor wires tears.
but the wounds do not hurt. now.
but whenever your not here. they cane.
so i am never going to let you leave
i will trap you here in my arms.
with your breathing into my face
the poisonous toxic love filling the air.
i cut through the disjointed silence and drop to my knees.
"i will you to never leave
give me a life time to show how much i love you"
Author notes
7. give me a life time to show how much i love you.
A contest entry
- PIF 7 Prompts. by Riftkin.
850 points, ended November 2, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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fantastic poem
good emotional content, well penned -
ooh very nice indeed sis,
and well deserving of the trophy
I loved how you opened this poem and how you ended it aswell
Very nice
All the best to you
Ken
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thanks bro.
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I love this very much, thank you for entering my contest.
Best of luck to you in it.
Riftkin
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Love has many forms... thank you for sharing this. Well done and best of luck.
Ken
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I think you did a good job with the prompt line you chose. I wish you the best in the contest.
Sam
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