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The Lighthouse

I reveal treacherous waters
I tame the storm
I am your hand to hold
I am a hole to heaven.

Author notes

PICTURE INSPIRED
I had another version to this when I wrote it, but it would have come to 21 words. I prefer the other, but c'est la vie.
Don't often enter new-write contests. I struggle to write on tap. This caught me.

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Comments

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  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    Imagery is great. Best to you


  • Samplette gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    I count 21 here..


  • Samplette gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    Ah, speaking as if the Lord. Nicely written. Thank you for entering the contest. You did a good job.
    Sam


  • Jesann gold member
    November 1, 2008
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    Very nice...I like this!!


  • everyone1 gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    Well done!

    Best wishes to you in this contest.

    Peace be with you and may love for always be what you claim.

    ~ James ~

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