From the roses that are cared for,
to bloom for you all of the season,
the garden soil turned in the late fall,
to provide delights to share at our table.
The walks by the river through all the seasons,
to touch and talk and love for all the good reasons,
to treat you with my secret BBQ delight,
to the romantic dinners by candlelight.
From the buttered popcorn in the theatre,
to the candy floss of all the fairs,
shopping hand in hand in the marketplace,
showing one another all our loving cares.
Laughing and playing like lovers shall do,
crying and holding through pains we live through,
the sweet kiss in the morning that warms my day,
please don’t ever take my sunshine away
Author notes
7. Give me a life time to show you how much I love you.
A contest entry
- PIF 7 Prompts. by Riftkin.
850 points, ended November 2, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - In Search Of Silver winning rhymes by poets whisper.
400 points, ended November 8, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really like the last line ... please don't take my sunshine away. I like the whole poem really. The candy floss ... lovely imagery.
thank you for your entry -
I love this very much, thank you for entering my contest.
Best of luck to you in it.
Riftkin
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Hello sweet poet,
You have penned here a very beautiful poem, so full of love,and very romantic.
I have enjoyed the read and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Much love and happiness,
Angel-anne.
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A wonderfully warm and loving write... Well done and best of luck.
Ken
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A beautiful write based on the prompt you chose. Very nicely crafted. Best to you in the contest.
Sam
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