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The River





Waters rise,
the trees are all bare,
skies are grey, the air cold,
nature is all gone, or tucked away.





































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Took a walk along the river today.

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  • sheltered
    November 2, 2008
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    yea, more like tucked away
    I need to get out more

  • TrippinBTM
    November 1, 2008

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    Nice. It's always sad when the leaves are all down. Autumn is my favorite season, but it very rapidly transitions into my least favorite the moment that happens. Still, there's beauty in every season, tucked away or not.


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    I bet even with all the leaves gone, it is still beautiful there. Your words have painted a picture for me.

    Joann