The dawn peeks through my window
and bathes my face in light.
I feel you lying next to me.
The day has started right.
The traffic is horrendous
as I crawl along the street
but my face is bathed in smiles.
You’re in the other seat.
I take a break for lunch
and though we are far apart
I know you’re thinking of me.
On my napkin is a heart.
The evening has arrived
and we enjoy each others charms.
I find release and comfort
lying in your arms.
It’s funny how you’re with me
every moment of the day.
No matter where I am…
you’re never far away.
Author notes
Option 6.
Prompt: It is your love that I feel each day of my life.
Picture Credit: http://snnr.deviantart.com/art/Feel-the-Silence-86208520
No more than 20 lines
A contest entry
- PIF 7 Prompts. by Riftkin.
850 points, ended November 2, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D
Comments
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This is such a beautiful poem and I love every word of it, that shiny was well deserved!
Best of luck!
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I really loved this poem you did excellent. Congratulations on the Bronze Trophy. the emotions throughout this write are great..
kat
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Ah so lovely !!!
Your words filled with love, warmth and tenderness.
"It's funny how you're with me
every moment of the day"
Love those lines.
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I love this very much, thank you for entering my contest.
Best of luck to you in it.
Riftkin
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beautiful
Hello sweet poet
A most beautiful write you have penned here.
Such strong emotion of love you have woven into your write.
The reader can feel such tenderness as they read your words of love.
Your words have come from deep within your heart, and the reader can see this, that is what makes this poem so beautiful.
Your words are soft and tender, and they wrap around the heart of the reader as they read your beautiful poem.
I wish you all the best in the contest my friend, and know that you are sent many beautiful blessings of love and happiness.
Your friend in poetry,
~Angel-Anne~
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Awww
It's a good description of how I feel. I woke up smooching my pillow again. No kidding.
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The life and its joy remains in the togetherness..and you have lived that with a feeling of the joy..and that is strength of this great work..well done...thanks for a wonderful poem...
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