Though love burns like a literal fire
At times
I still believe in its truth
Because I have you
And you have taught me
That love is patient and kind
And blind to fault
You have taught me to love
Unconditinally
I can't explain why I love
Only that I love
And that I love with everything I am
And with everything that I have
Thank you for giving me another chance at love
Author notes
My current boyfriend was my muse for this piece. I have loved, made mistakes, and lost. Now, I have been given another chance to do it right with another guy who is absolutely amazing in every way. Thank you, my dear.
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- Your Belief In Love (75 words or less) by oOJohnOo.
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Comments
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an awesome cascade of emotions flow through your words. your boyfriend would and should be astonded by this piece to know how much you truly care for him. good luck
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