Ghosts and Goblins, and Witches Brew
Dogs Howl, cats Scream…
Who goes there? ...unseen
Doors Bang, chains Clang…
And...Hoot Hooty Hoo...
What’s that? Where’s Jack?
Big EYES watching You
Bump...Ditty...Bump...
As it Bangs out a tune
Ghosts and Goblins, and Witches Brew
Swoosh, swoosh…
Goes it... as it brushed by me
What’s that? Black Cat...
Or a Witch I see...
Ghosts, and Goblins, and Witches Brew
Who’s scared? I’m not… but
...Hooow about YOOO?
It’s Halloween Night...and
There’s a Full Moon!
Author notes
Age groups for this poem
4-6
6-8
8-10
A contest entry
- Witchy Poos and Ghoulish Dudes! (children's Halloween poems) by Concrete Angel.
800 points, ended October 9, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This was so cute and fun. The perfect write for litle tike around Halloween. I think this could be converted into a children's picture book. You know like the ones that have the pictures hiding behind flaps and stuff? I mean, how cute would it be to read
"hat’s that? Where’s Jack?"
and then move a flap to see a big grinning jackolantern with
"Big EYES watching You" right below it.
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Concrete Angel
Thank you so very very much for your wonderful comments. I am taken back by your response and it means a lot. Thank you
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wonderful Halloween chant... really creates the answer to why we children of all ages love Halloween.... Good sense of rhythm... sparking all those momentary thrills one feels when Trick or Treating... lovely stuff.
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rrw
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This is great. The form really makes the poem more spooky.
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Gotlilt
Hi Good afternoon and thank you for stopping by to read and comment. I grately appreciate it
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well done Breeze, i like the imagery you've created with sounds. reminds me of the neighborhood haunted house you got to walk through and have the daylights scared out of you.
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IntimidusRex
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you are most welcome Breeze, twas a very nice piece, I enjoyed.
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I love poems that have to be read aloud!
I can imagine this going down a treat with a young audience!
Lovely lovely
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igoe
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a fun piece to read, full of great sounds and cute lines. well done.
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this was alot of fun to write and read outloud to children. Thank you for your wonderful comments.
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this was a great rhyme for the holiday season. thanks so much for entering!
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Piccola
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Great write!
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thank you so much.
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“Ghosts and Goblins, and Witches Brooms” pretty much sounds like my house year round LOL Actually this is a very cute and well done Halloween piece. I really like the tone of it as you read it aloud. Well done.
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This is a perfect Halloween poem!! You captured the holiday feelings perfectaly. Good luck in the contests dear.
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This is GGG-rrr-888! I enjoyed reading this. The words were in tune to the beat. I hope you win the contest...You deserve it!
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thank you so very much for saying so...
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Great
I love the rhymes and the rhythm to it. A very fun poem. Best of luck in the contest. -
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Ryan79
Thank you, I wrote it for a class assignment.
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l.o.l.
wow, loved this rhymey, chimey tune, bout ghosts n witches brooms! great flow, great story!
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L.O.L.
thank you, seemed appropriate for the season, and the contest of course!
I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Thanks again.
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