where~angels~go

inside

every star

that has yet to

fall is an angel waiting
and watching from above
whenever one falls ~ I smile
knowing they have been

sent down to earth to
help light the way
of a mortal in

distress

Author notes

"im getting in shape with Darkwell"

A contest entry

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individuality
May 17

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a good poem, ah those mere mortals, well they need a hand here and there lol - i think god just slapped the back of my head for being cheeky
Darkwell
January 29

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if im an angel someday i hope i get to play on a star for a little while before i gotta come back here and guide but that could be fun too beauitful poem in a lovely simple shape
couldbeworse
January 15
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it is true...angels do guide us and watch for us. great write. loved all of it. very comforting.
Daisy Ballerina
January 7
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Lovely.....
nature
December 10, 2008

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Lol
Had to read and reread the short poem in diamond structure; shifting like a sonnet in thought at the central point with the confidence of first hand experience. Truly, full of light for the distressed humanity. A very balanced delightful write indeed.
Thanks for entering the contest.
Puppydog
December 5, 2008

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BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
What a lovely way to express how angels come down to us, they are indeed around us everyday, if one is quiet with an open heart they can feel them with us.'s
Draig aine
November 23, 2008
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really well done
Sunshine Always
November 21, 2008

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Beautiful words, great layout and spot on background. A lovely write that is a pleasure to read.. Good luck in the contest ...mal
Guerrero
November 16, 2008

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awww.. i love this one... great job and i love the shape of the poem.. great job..
Guerrero
November 16, 2008
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okay...this is all typed in like wingding or something like that..i cant read it... am i supposed to?
PrabhuDayal Khattar
November 15, 2008

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yes..what a thought to discuss the life with a difference my friend..you made me curious with this..well done.....thanks for sharing..
Super-man
November 4, 2008
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Stunning.

really awesome work.
An angel for a distressed soul.
Super-man
November 4, 2008
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Stunning.

really awesome work.
An angel for a distressed soul.
AutumnGypsy
November 2, 2008

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Was this intended to be a special font for this contest. Because it did not work. And it took the place of someone who could have a proper go at a trophy.