this old house
sits in quiet
contemplation
awaits the sound
of laughter
only then
does it evolve
into a home
Author notes
20 words or less
A contest entry
- 20 words or less - ends tonight by sheltered.
550 points, ended November 2, 2008, 27 entries
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may i always be homeless then
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awww, you could always come visit aussieland... we could find a little corner for you to sleep in
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He can have my cat box
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thank god it will on your bed and not under mine!
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LOL Well as long as he purrs not snores that's ok
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psst
thats why you close the door.... I really dont want to hear anything! -
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LOL I have to leave the window open in case he needs to go!
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ummm is that a pussy burglar or a cat burglar?
then you'd be cat napped -
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You'd have to ask him, he's the one with the rough tongue!
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he aint around... so I have to ask you!!!
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Purrrrrs
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i'm glad i was at least allowed the cat box
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Hey I gave ya my bed, what more do you want
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holy lmao
what a spiel -
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What? We were being honest
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Get's the blankets ready!
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Poet
What we call home . Can it ever be without laughter I wonder? But your words bring back memories of a home filled with sadness. write on dear poet.
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