Swimming with fishes,
landing on top of the moon
vomiting up brains maybe
I shouldn't have been swinging
off stars.
Author notes
Dont know, it was a dream I had, I had to sum it up in 20 words, I tried but there is more to the story 
A contest entry
- 20 words or less - ends tonight by sheltered.
550 points, ended November 2, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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id like to know more of the story
lol
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Haha I shall add more just for you though
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this one sounds "high"
Like in stars that is. too much swinging will definatly make you upchuck! Yuck, nice write though! The Shaker
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haha you know that's so true, I would get sick i know that much
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oh !
i like it.
helen~
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Haha Im glad you liked it
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fun. maybe a bit too much
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Haha thanks
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