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Never-ending Love

Love is like a flame,
burning with intense fire.
From the soul,
it will speak through you.
You cant douse the flame.
The never-ending love

can hurt you,

and there is nothing

you can do to stop it.

 

When you finally give in,

you will realise that

you have stepped into

the ups and downs of love.

But another thing you realise,

is how much better you feel with it,

than without it.

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  • oOJohnOo
    November 5, 2008
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    beautiful poem. please leave in your authors notes the reason behind this poem.


  • Bambi Green
    November 5, 2008

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    A lot of truth in your poem. Something I just can't seem to do is write a poem about love. You did great.
    One thing I notice is that you so far seem to always have a strong ending to your poems. Made me realize in my heart how right you are