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Herself only

Enchanted garden encircles
Her heavy,
            Weary,
                      Dead soul
Blackened colors praying

                Her release

Author notes

Contest prompt:
13 words on picture http://kaikuskylianfay.deviantart.com/art/Found-102307489 credit to KaikuSkylianFay from Deviantart.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008

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    Blackened colours ... what fantastic two words!

    Stunning write that captures the mind and dares it to look away

    ♥
    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • januaryrain gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    Wow, Beautifully sad, Excellent take on the prompt. I love it.
    Good luck in the contest.


  • Painted Nails
    November 2, 2008

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    Wow... so emotional. I am glad this piece is so short (Not only for contest purposes) because otherwise, I don't think it will be as emotional and beautiful as it is now! Wonderful piece!
    Your sister,
    Sydney


  • MD Masroor
    November 1, 2008
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    Short, strong, beautiful. You've definitely improved! Good luck in the contest!!


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    TOUCHING AND SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

    I just read one of my friends who wrote about the same pic and her words did the pic a beautiful justice, yours also are very touching and beautiful and fit this pic beautifully!!!

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