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Sharp objects fall,

descending, thumping
hatreds bumping.

Stir of the night,
we let drip of what’s
right.

What is right?

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  • hks
    November 18, 2008

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    hey i wrote a poem like a month aggo and it ended with

    then what is right?

    awesome. :]]


    • Play-A-War
      November 19, 2008
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      Ahahah no way! Well maybe we think alike ahah =D it was just something quick to write.


  • sheltered
    November 2, 2008
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    what?
    did you not get the pamphlet?
    the one
    with the pretty pictures of paradise?