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Friends that come into your life.

Friends that come into your life

Friends come into your life,
Some stay… some go,
I guess you just have to go with the flow,
True friends are ones I feel that are guided to each of us,
People who are genuine and true,
Throughout my life,
I can honestly say,
I have had the privilege and honour,
To be guided to true souls on this earth,
Ones I know deep in my heart,
Will always be there,
Ones, who do deeply care,
No matter when or where,
My dear true friends,
You can always rely on me,
I have never and will never…
Let any of my true friends down,
Nor would I ever make you look like a clown!
So to each and every one of you,
I want to say,
I truly thank you all from the bottom of my heart,
I also thank spirit for guiding you all to me and please know I won’t part,
I will be there for you all,
Whether you need a shoulder to cry on,
An ear to listen,
Or just a hug,
You will always have me,
Because to me… true friends are very rare,
So when you find them,
You let them know you care.

Namaste Selfexpressive.

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  • plutusp
    November 2, 2008

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    I accually liked this poem. I usually hate when poems are layed out like that because the lines in my mind would look better if the gradually descending after each little sentence. But For some reason I liked it. Good Job


    • Selfexpressive
      November 3, 2008
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      Thank you.

      Thanks for commenting on my poem plutusp... maybe my words hit home with you? As I know that is how I feel with my true friends... and have been bit in the past with people I thought were friends however found it so easy to turn their back on me... thanks again,

      Selfexpressive aka Karen.