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letting go once and for all

the strength to keep going
to fight the battle through and through
and live every just trying to catch up
it's not one I have within

instead I let go
and move on with my life
putting the remnants of what's left of us to rest
how i wish i could still hold on

this strength within is full of pain
as this double edged sword stabs at my heart
I can only think that it must be better
even if it's not

it's been four years
but our story has come to an end
and I'm letting go once and for all
proud of my survival from the fall

Author notes

10.~ People think it's holding on that makes you stronger, but sometimes it's letting go

pinkdaliah (didnt rly understand if u wanted that or not so i put my sn just in case)

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  • HisFavoriteMistake
    November 1, 2008
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    Thank you. Yes I wanted the SN lol

    and very good write. I really enjoyed this