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Poison tree

Inside herself
She’s
        Bleeding
        Crawling
        Trying
Yet, she bleeds still as she rapidly
                  Tastes
The poison tree
                        We call life

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  • sheltered
    November 2, 2008
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    pretty


  • nancy drew
    November 1, 2008

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    for maximum effectiveness, i'd redo the format. and lose the
    "Drip Drip".

    helen~


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    DEEPLY MOVING!!!!!

    Yes, life does seem harsh and as wars and cruelity becomes more each day life also shows its open wounds, its very soul wanting to find an end to it all.'s