Lady, lay safe in my arms,
nothing harms, I watch you sigh.
A gentle touch on your skin,
let me in and softly die.
Lady, lay safe in my arms,
loving charms, sensual cry.
Lose control and let it go,
caressing slow as we lie.
Lady, lay safe in my arms,
no alarms tell of your bliss.
Le petite mort comes again,
without pain in lover’s kiss.
Lady, lay safe in my arms,
stormy balms of love tonight.
Beautiful - the agony
that sets you free in delight.
Author notes
Le petite mort is the spiritual release felt during a woman's orgasm.
Form: awdl gywydd
In a list
A contest entry
- i watched her die many times. by Death of the Author.
700 points, ended November 16, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - i watched her die in rhyme. by Death of the Author.
700 points, ended November 21, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ok, this blew me away! Since I have been studying a bit the form Cyhydded Fer this is pleasure to read... Loved the rhyme and ease.
Sigh, Just lovely
k
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Thank you Kris
How the devil did you find my alter ego
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Lol, I didn't so much discover... Just going through the lists of pertinent forms on your page! Im glad I did
Kris
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Very beautiful. It's soft and sensual like floating on a sea of love. Good luck in the contest.
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you know, i really like this. the rhythmic flow is sensual in itself. yes - it's good.
helen~
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Woww Jems
this is sooo butiful and the form is perfect for it
i love you
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Thankies my angel
Its a beautiful form and fits with that sweet moment perfectly indeed.
I love you
YLD
Jem xxxx
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Good choice of title, I was actually wondering whether to call my contest that.
I like the form, is it welsh? I've never seen one before, but you've done this really well. I'm glad that you haven't gone over the top with details and such, this is a very pleasant and loving read.
Just tiny things - a comma between charms and sensual? And a dash between beautiful and the?
Very well done, especially since this contest is barely an hour old.
Thank you for entering and good luck
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Thank you and editing in progress
The form is Welsh and can be found at http://allpoetry.com/column/2347187
Good timing for the contest I have been playing with this idea a while now.
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Thanks for the link
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