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I am sorry

I'm sorry
I'm lookin
I'm findin no reason to stay.

You were all I had
Now I'm low and I'm sad

You must feel low

That's how it goes

I'm sorry
I'm pagan
And lookin in  is so easy
When you aren't the one with the shame

I have all my reasons
Goes with changing seasons

I am sad
You were all I had

So he said, "Shape up or ship out"
He rejected me with no doubt

It's all because I'm pagan

can you pick it apart?

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  • TOEchikira
    November 15, 2008

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    aww!!! thats horrible! (not the poem lol) i love this. im sorry he cant accept u for ur beliefs. much love <3