Sitting toe to toe
wishing you were here
What did I do so wrong
to make you shatter my soul
I am broken beyond repair
Author notes
prompt: shattered
exactly 25 words
A contest entry
- 8 entrys, 25 words, don't dissapoint. by catalyst..
550 points, ended November 2, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I agree with catseye. This was amazing! The picture fits it so well! Congrats on the bronze! You totally deserve it! -Liz
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I really liked the format here
it seemed to add onto the image with each line
great write -
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Thank you for hosting this contest I enjoyed writing for it, it was inspirational.
Cheryl
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Cute take sounds like a little girl.
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