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Unwanted Night

With crystal eyes,
She looks upon the naked floor,
Weeping under a canopy,
Alone.

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Picture Credit: http://kaikuskylianfay.deviantart.com/art/Found-102307489

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  • OxymoronishGenuis
    May 26

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    aww this is so sad,
    very wonderfully written
    beautiful imagery shown in such small verse
    good job
    its moving


  • Silent Emotions
    November 19, 2008

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    short but powerful. i think its cool when so few words can make such an impact and your certainly did. wonderfully done!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008

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    It is like the picture was created after reading your words ... beautiful!

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    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • januaryrain gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    Beautiful, what a sad lonely picture you penned, but great take on the prompt. I love it.
    Good luck in the contest.