You set me up to fall
Gave me everything
Called me your angel
Then broke my wings
So I could never leave
and shattered me
Author notes
prompt-shattered
25 words, exactly
A contest entry
- 8 entrys, 25 words, don't dissapoint. by catalyst..
550 points, ended November 2, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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this is very realtable
I really enjoyed the first three lines -
Sad, it really does happen that way.
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