My tears fell upon the splinters of china
hearing the echo of the crash,
grandmother’s platter was swept away
retrieving an image of a rose…
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Ptompt: Shattered
A contest entry
- 8 entrys, 25 words, don't dissapoint. by catalyst..
550 points, ended November 2, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Lovely!
A elegant poem of such simplicity with its short but powerful message.
Roses are very special to me and so was this.
Mariana *rose*
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Great imagery.
This was very creative
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I always feel bad when something like that happens, something that meant so much.
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Very good! SHort, to the point and the imagry is in the words!
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different take
i like it
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