Scattered
heartache
all over
tightening, to be
tossed, caught,
exposed for what
really is, a
egotistical, son of a bitch
destroying hearts, breaking up lives
Author notes
Prompt: shattered
done in double accrostic
going down spelling shattered goingup end line spelling shattered
OH well 25 words in acrostic.
A contest entry
- 8 entrys, 25 words, don't dissapoint. by catalyst..
550 points, ended November 2, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I loved how the words shattered goes up one side and down the other.
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Excellent
Jesus woman, you are good with all these poems... French, this THINGIE and whatnots... I like this one, very much! -
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Thank you for your comments
glad you liked this one.
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Very powerful and expressive write you have here sis!!! This is very well done!!
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double acroustic
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Impressive, Sis! A two way acrostic with a word count, too! Must have taken brainpower to work this out!
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I have trouble doing a single acrostic, let alone a double.
very clever
Juls
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wow...
never seen this done before
must have took some work
fine job
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This form -a double-is amazing to me--I can
imagine what it took to do this except a lot of talent and sharpness of the mind.
I don't have it.
Love you Tory
Bye
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You got your point across, good prompt.
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wow this was good i mean really good, creative as hell too, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Damn, a double acrostic! I haven't seen this
in a long time! You did an excellent job with
this one! Lovely work and good luck to you.
Jeremy0826
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Bloody hell!!!
Great stuff, I have said it before and doubtless will again, you are the best acrostician I there is.
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Great double acrostic, you captured that raw pain so well.... good luck!
♥
whisper
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ingenious, I love the acrostics you do, very nice
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Thanks hon. Glad you liked this one. I love my acrostics as well. okay hell i love poetry in general.
Passiosn
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