left dangling over the curb,
you dare smile at the memory
of his smile
and it crushes,
but is therapeutic,
while damaged nerves
try to restore
Author notes
25 words
prompt is shattered
In a list
A contest entry
- 8 entrys, 25 words, don't dissapoint. by catalyst..
550 points, ended November 2, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I really like where you took the prompt here.
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Great use of the prompt
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aww
very sad
but amazing
i see a shiny in your future...
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perfect reflection on the prompt...nicely done.
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