She was
a bottle of
honeysuckle perfume,
tightly bounded
by the lid of his ego,
he released her
to inhale the aroma ~
at his discretion.
Author notes
prompt : shattered
A contest entry
- 8 entrys, 25 words, don't dissapoint. by catalyst..
550 points, ended November 2, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - something's there by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 4, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very well done . . liked "tightly bounded" and "at his discrretion" . . congrats on the trophies !!
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so beautifully penned in few words... x
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oh!
tightly bounded
by the lid of his ego,.....
its enough to read between the lines....
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This is beautiful
I love the connections you made here -
H., another delicate and poignant poem; you write so succinctly and yet, always fully develop your ideas... and you leave me wanting more! Well-done.
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