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Elaborate Hokes of Love

Your image traces
the line of my obsession

It's an incantation of my demise

I wallow in the ocean of delights,
wondering where you are

you never cared for me anyway,
eventhough I shatter the imprints
of your sexual prowess

I'm a slave by reason of insanity,
captured in the scent of your
clandestine ambrosia

Randezvous with me in twilight
and let the dawn kiss the darkness
once more

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  • Amera gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    You took the prompt in a direction that I had not thought of. This is a welcome addition to the contest and I thank you for entering.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    wow mr howard see what i like about you hon you know how to switch up those writing suits so good i swear you are a great poetry actress ((smile)) good luck my love in the contest


  • hotchocolate gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    Another great one from you that I enjoyed Good luck in the contest!

    you never cared for me anyway,
    eventhough I shatter the imprints
    of your sexual prowess