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Smoke

I looked at the people in front of me .

All I could see was misdirection,lies and trickery.

And when I tried to pull the mask of this front.

I was ridiculed for being to harsh and to blunt.

 

I am just a man trying to make people see.

That lies and alibis are ways to false glee.

And true no matter how harsh is the best way to live.

Because with that loss of happiness you learn how to give.

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  • Coffer
    November 3, 2008

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    Too true, I wish I could stay off that path myself. Great work to tell the message of whats wrong, and what it'll bring you. Good luck.


  • Bleed the truth X
    November 1, 2008
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    The rhyming is a nice touch..
    i like it.
    gooodd jobbb dear.