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Deserted

Deserted, Looking at you in my imageless thoughts
stopped, attached to my desires

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http://kaikuskylianfay.deviantart.com/art/Found-102307489

credit to artist ^^

[love ya]

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008

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    "imageless thoughts" - these two words stand alone giving this poem the strength!

    The rest adds to it making this incredible


    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
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    ~Manda