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Standing

Missing image

Standing between two heartbeats
                     
a violet sigh remembers.

Robed in self reflecting darkness.





 

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Picture Credit: http://kaikuskylianfay.deviantart.com/art/Found-102307489

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008

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    Whoa.
    I'm speechless in awe of this!

    Fabulous!
    ♥
    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Kari gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    The very last line is what really added to this piece. I liked where you went with this image.

    Kari


  • januaryrain gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    Excellent, sad but it flows right off the lips.
    Good luck in the contest.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    oh, i loved the use of the word "robed" beautiful. bringing out hte beauty of the poem tho, it is dark.
    and great background choice...goes well with the image and poem. so many people don't take that into consideration ...it really brings out the poem ...i think. almost like thats the moon shining upon her. and you didn't have to state it in the poem...it speaks for itself through your background choice.