Treasures of the heart
loom within caves of discovery
Rich with immortal joys
that filter the spirit from
eternal decay
Elusive to managing magnets
of lust who swarm like bee's
over prideful pursuits laiden
with fools gold
ever searching yet unable to ascertain
solace within their hollow soul,
which echoe in silence
loom within caves of discovery
Rich with immortal joys
that filter the spirit from
eternal decay
Elusive to managing magnets
of lust who swarm like bee's
over prideful pursuits laiden
with fools gold
ever searching yet unable to ascertain
solace within their hollow soul,
which echoe in silence
Author notes
Note to the author of this contest.
Tony, I am aware that you ask in your list of rules
that we not submit any dark or depressing writes.
My intentions in this poem was to point out
that the value of life and living is more than
pursuits for riches and power.
I hope you find my entry acceptable as
it was written soley by inspiration alone.
Thank you.
A contest entry
- Blow me away with "POEMS" by thepoetssoul.
4250 points, ended November 8, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a great entry you have written.
Great metaphor and imagery.
Thanks for your entry,
Best of wishes to you.



Tony

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Interesting choice of backgrounds lol Pirates were only helping themselves rather than being rich and free like society dictates, most social outcasts. But the poem is strong.
C
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amazing
very deep, very profound ly true my brother..and very much you and that brilliant pen! lots of luck in the contest my man!




