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Pieces of Eight!

Treasures of the heart
loom within caves of discovery

Rich with immortal joys
that filter the spirit from
eternal decay

Elusive to managing magnets
of lust who swarm like bee's

over prideful pursuits laiden
with fools gold

ever searching yet unable to ascertain
solace within their hollow soul,
which echoe in silence

Author notes

Note to the author of this contest.

Tony, I am aware that you ask in your list of rules
that we not submit any dark or depressing writes.

My intentions in this poem was to point out
that the value of life and living is more than
pursuits for riches and power.

I hope you find my entry acceptable as
it was written soley by inspiration alone.

Thank you.

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  • thepoetssoul
    November 8, 2008

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    This is a great entry you have written.
    Great metaphor and imagery.
    Thanks for your entry,
    Best of wishes to you.

    Tony


  • Cannonsfire
    November 8, 2008

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    Interesting choice of backgrounds lol Pirates were only helping themselves rather than being rich and free like society dictates, most social outcasts. But the poem is strong. C


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    amazing

    very deep, very profound ly true my brother..and very much you and that brilliant pen! lots of luck in the contest my man!