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This Is What I See

Brick red is the image

that appears in front of me,

fading in and out

now a tunnel is what I see.

 

Am I moving forward,

I can't quite tell;

but I feel a part of,

as if I'm in a spell.

 

Flowing back and forth

is a bright light on my right,

apple green appears;

covering my sight.

 

Purple or maybe blue

pushes away green,

but it seems to push right back;

creating a merging stream.

 

Other colors join,

too close to tell their shades;

moving effortlessly,

appearing then just fades.

 

 

Author notes

I may have taken this too literally but it was fun!

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  • sleepinglion
    June 19
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    This is interesting Kathy, when I meditate, the most common thing that I see is a pulsing blue/purple light. Sight is such a wonderful phenemenon, beyond understanding. And colours, - Wow! I am old enough to remember when everything was in black and white
    David


  • AsIThink gold member
    January 10
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    We all see so many different angles even when we're looking at the same thing. This was wonderfully written and flow so well for me. I have to say that your abilities to keep me from top to bottom have not lapsed. Bravo...really enjoyed this PR.

    AsIThink...


  • Meroza
    November 2, 2008
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    Wow, I sure wouldn't be stuck in a colorful tunel like that You didn't take it too literally, you took it the way you wanted to.

    Thanks for entering and best of luck.


  • who iam
    November 1, 2008

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    Sounds like a Rainbow has invaded your spectrum!
    Niice picture as I read his one.
    Good luck with the contest!