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Sculptured in his aura
beaming ardor's afterglow
sheer saffron veil
emcompasses our love
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Author notes
http://kaikuskylianfay.deviantart.com/art/Found-102307489
13 words ONLY
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture XV by Manda Kathryn.
400 points, ended November 17, 2008, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh. This is a sweet little poem that you have penned in here. I loved the picture and the border you have up. I think that this poem is perfect for Valentine's Day that just passed. It has that deep love kind of feel to it that is just so nice. I thought you did a good job of expressing yourself here.
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Oh what a beautiful poem! My heart beat a little harder and I found a smile forming on my lips
Stunning!
♥
Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Hi, that would be sculptured and encompasses ♥
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Amazing poem and Wow I really loved the picture!
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oh, this is beautiful...I really love the last line "sheer saffron veil encompasses our love"
lovely~
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This was great.Such a beautiful picture and the words I thought were perfectly chosen.You shoul have won in my opinion.
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So much said with so few words...nicely penned. And I must say, as I have said before, I am biased for love poetry, so you took me the instant I read the title LOL
ASM
AKA Raymond -
Delightfully Sweet
soft words to caress a lonely heart
cementing it with love`s ardor. Lovely.
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