In the mist of kisses
souls dance in delight,
watching the world sleep
upon cold winters night.
Hands of destiny unite
sighing true love,
only to be lost
innocence, corrupt.
waiting for purity,
upon winters night.
Lonely, dejected,
world cries.
Author notes
30-40 words
Prompt: waiting for the moon
In a list
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #28 by AutumnGypsy.
550 points, ended November 6, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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WOW
so heart breaking and truly moves this reader...the flow is as tears dripping from a broken heart...excellent and thank you kindly for sharing it with me
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heartbreaking
your gift for holding the readers emotions in your hands was really brought to attension here
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This is such a sad interpretation of the prompt, I feel the sadness in my heart when I read this, even in its sadness it is still beautiful. Best to you in the contest
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Excellent sis!!! I love the flow here!! You did a very beautiful job with this piece!!!
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!
Yes, as we travel the road of life with all of its ups and downs we still pray to the moon at night to bring sweet happiness our way.
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yay, you have written. Great write hun
Juls
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So good to read something from you sissy!
Aww... hearts and souls to me met, only to be lost... purity once gone so hard to warm once again!
Beautiful write
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Yeah its been a while since I've written anything. Lol. I'm glad that you liked it!
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Wonderful
How beautiful and passionate to pass the time in waiting for the soft rise of moonlight. Yet sorrowful at loss of such devotion. The agony of waiting was so brilliantly cured with the combining of destiny and love and the suddenly taken away at the loss of innocence.
Truly the world cries.
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