She has parents,
Yet she is an orphan.
They say they don't know her,
Where she is at,
They just don't.
So leave it.
Shut up, get out.
My daughter is not gay.
Shes not a disgrace.
We didn't kick her out.
So leave it.
Orphan...
Orphan...
So leave it.
A contest entry
- Word Prompt I - by Manda Kathryn.
400 points, ended November 17, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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that is sad
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What a nicely penned poem....
I don't know whther you're talking about yourself, but the poem is effective and communicative...
You write wonderfully, honey!
Sweet and wet kisses all you!
Galaxy2 -
What a nicely penned poem....
I don't know whther you're talking about yourself, but the poem is effective and communicative...
You write wonderfully, honey!
Sweet and wet kisses all you!
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is this what your parents have said to you?? 
Well I still love you.
great poem, such emotion
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The first two lines really sum up how alot of teenagers feel in this life, and the rest of the poem shows more than meets the eye
An excellent poem!
♥
Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Liked the sadness and the power in those first two lines Lily...the just give your goosedumps and it made my heartache for you.
It must be hard, but you'll get by. Just keep moving
Don't stop writing, please.
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She has parents,
Yet she is an orphan. <<< beautiful yet hurtful line, i loved the title of this poem as it told you exactly what i was going to be reading about and you put a very truthful twist on being an orphan, is it rather a state of mind ? great ending and a very thoughtful poem
well done
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