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Demons

Don't wonder, don't think,
Don't ask, just know,
I'll never again
Let my true feelings show.
Kept so close
and held so tight,
Thrown away when,
I came to the light.
Should've never let you know
What's contained inside.
There are things to adhere to
Rules I must abide.
Things kept secret
Demons I keep away.
Despite me darkness,
You swore you'd stay.
Force to live a life
Of solitude and fear,
Should've known better
When you said you'd be there.
These demons will consume me.
"I can't be saved" so you said
So I must stay to myself
Until the demons claim me dead.

Author notes

Wrote this when my love left me because he couldn't handle the darkness that is kept inside of me

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  • bloodlovernuberX9
    February 11
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    i will tell you right now that i can relate to this. you did great job
    Rainbow


  • DemonicChanel420
    November 6, 2008

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    This is yet another beautiful poem,
    You are a very talented writer,
    Your words are amazing,
    & your poetry is so relatable,
    Very nice job!

  • xbloodxredx
    November 2, 2008

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    this is such a beautiful poem.....same thing happened to me, but i couldnt find the words to write anything. i give it 2 thumbs up.


  • Xx-BrokenHeart-xX
    November 1, 2008
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    It really is an amazing poem, I loved it. Keep up the amazing work

  • my life 21
    November 1, 2008
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    im sorry about ur love

    i jmus finished my nw poem its called my heart bleeds

  • my life 21
    November 1, 2008
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    i love ur poem its asif i can realte to yo

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