Yesterday i walked
down the street
and i kept telling myself
that if i keep on going,
that ill find what im after.
Today i walk
down the street,
I tell myself,
that if i keep walking
ill find what im after.
Tomorrow I will walk
down the street,
questioning myself.
Why did i seek?
I had what I was after.
Searching for the strength of heart,
hidden from within.
Sometimes it takes a moment,
to cherrish the thought of another
human being, that is just like you.
A contest entry
- Blow me away with "POEMS" by thepoetssoul.
4250 points, ended November 8, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a nice entry you've entered.
We should all cherish one-another
Thanks for the entry.
Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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This is more telling than showing, poetry requires more images to keep it interesting. Using different things you see or do to visualize for the reader. Keep writing though, we all learn. C
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