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Wating...on The Light

Sitting here on the beach, holding myself tight
Can't let anyone see just how I feel
Sitting here all alone
Watching the sky and holding back tears
Waiting...
....to hide myself....
mask my tears

In the moonlight
Camoflaughing my heart

A contest entry

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 6, 2008

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    Such a sad interpretation of this prompt, I felt the pain within flowing off the screen. Well done. Best to you in the contest