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Orphan. (Hay(na)ku)

Alone
parents gone
praying for adoption

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008

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    I am very impressed that you created a world of emotion in just three lines; a moving piece that reaches beyond the norm

    Great poem!
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    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda